Zep on a wheel

This starts off like a Zepellin meets Marillion kinda progressive mystical rock ballad..Obviously Zep are a huge influence..Has alot of possibilities with the neat rising lilt of the verses-but then............. there's no development..

The Go on,come on sticks on the same chord sequence- was a disappointment-as i really wanted it to tangent somewhere n it didn't... So any pleasures to be had in this track for me are in the inventive n creative production touches..The cool slightly 'off' acoustic embellishments that appear later-and the ending (specially) was interesting with the watery chorus vocals n ping ponging strange harmonies coming in n out with psychedelic relish..Kinda made the repetitiveness seem like a mantra-was my favourite part of the track..