Good Fun

This is great fun, quite catchy, though for reasons that aren't completely clear it doesn't really move me. It puts a bit of a smile on your face and gets you tapping your foot and not much else, but then I suppose it doesn't have much grander ambitions anyway.

The chorus is cool, a nice play on words and the backing vocals are well done. I would be tempted to see how it sounds with the first chorus without backing vocals. In fact I think you might improve the song with a bit more attention to the arrangement in general - a little sprinkle of inconsistency is definitely a good thing. I think you could be a bit more adventurous with the verse melody too (longer phrases).