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Postby zxyz » Thu Mar 17, 2016 7:35 am

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Postby Krispy » Thu Mar 17, 2016 1:05 pm

Tease.
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Postby zxyz » Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:52 pm

Krispy wrote:Tease.



hehe .. I'm working on a song but it's not ready . I don't want to displease anyone's ears yet.
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Postby Krispy » Thu Mar 17, 2016 7:19 pm

OK. We'll be waiting. All three of us. :mrgreen:
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Postby zxyz » Fri Mar 18, 2016 6:56 am

stealer xxx (3.1).mp3
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Three .. that many huh ? ..

Ok here's a small bit of what I'm working on .. it's a cover of a tune by Free .. but I was tipsy so y'know .. it's gonna take a while to iron it out .. heh ..
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Postby Krispy » Fri Mar 18, 2016 10:53 am

I will get to it soon Zee - promise. Looking after a sick teenager atm, hard to focus, you know. :(
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Postby Ailwyn Rees » Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:48 am

zxyz wrote:
stealer xxx (3.1).mp3
Three .. that many huh ? ..

Ok here's a small bit of what I'm working on .. it's a cover of a tune by Free .. but I was tipsy so y'know .. it's gonna take a while to iron it out .. heh ..


Yep, I'm one of the three! I'll have a listen later today. Played it a couple of times in a band called Stealer (quite apt!)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L74EgoR ... cg&index=3
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Postby steban » Tue Mar 22, 2016 4:47 am

Nice growly ZZ Top vocal going on, pure growl, dude! The guitar groove was happening. It could be the basis for a totally new song.

That was a pretty good cover, Ailwyn. That singer sounded like the original, maybe a note lower at the top end.
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Postby Krispy » Fri Mar 25, 2016 11:17 am

It's weird the way that first guitar just suddenly disappears after 18 seconds. I kinda like the conversational philosophical vocals - but where is it going? You cut yourself off in your prime matey! Like Stebs said, definitely got a groove; the bass is alright, drums a bit tinny but within acceptable limits for what seems like a demo.
Don't think I know the original, so am at an advantage I guess.
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Postby zxyz » Sat May 06, 2017 3:21 am

Here ya go Kimmers .....

The orig -------------- Stealer by Free ..

What Ailwn? you played with Free ?

Thanx Stebs .. I try to growl when I can .. (y'know, then the wife's not asleep in the next room .. ;)

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